Happy Holidays

Have a great and safe holiday.

Most children are in need of new pencils, pens, highlighters and rubbers and many children also need new reading activity books - please check with your child.

I will be in the classroom with Jan in the first week of term.  I will be doing all the running records and JAM testing for the term as well as transitioning the children.

See you in two weeks :)

Thanks Helena


Information Reports


Our Information Reports

Last week a hedgehog appeared on the playground. We dropped everything and went outside to look.  The children were so excited that I decided that I would use this opportunity as an emotional hook to introduce the children to Information Reports.

First we wrote down our wonderings.  Some of our wonderings were:

What do hedgehogs eat?
Where do they live?
Do they have babies or eggs?
How much do they weigh?
Do they lose their spikes?

Then Trinity, who has a pet hedgehog, became our expert and told us all she knew about hedgehogs.  The children took notes (in words and pictures) as she answered their questions.

The next day, we talked about sources of information and the importance of using several sources of information to verify facts.  We found some interesting sites and videos on the Internet, which gave us more and sometimes conflicting information. For example, we first read that hedgehogs are endangered but then we learnt that in New Zealand they are regarded as a pest because of the negative effect on our native species such as kiwi.

After that, we looked at the structure and content of several Information Reports.

Then we organized all the key information we had gathered onto an Information Web.  We did this as a class. We sorted our information into different categories with headings to make it easier to write our Information Reports. Most of the children have been practicing this skill in reading so it was a great opportunity to transfer this skill.  The children then did their own information web, selecting information that they wanted to include in their Information Report.

Next, I paired the children up and had them work together to write a draft copy.  They had to include a Title, General Statement, Description and an Evaluation.  After the children had written a draft they edited their work for correct spelling, punctuation and meaning.

Finally, the children each published their Information Report.  All the writing is the children’s own words.  They have done an outstanding job and the writing is to a very high standard.

We are learning to write an Information Report
We will know we can do this when we can…
·         Write about a living or non-living thing
  • Follow the Writing Process
  • Have a Title
  • Write a General Statement or Definition
  • Write a Description describing what it looks like, where it is found and how it behaves
  • Write an Evaluation- stating how I feel about the living or non-living thing
  • Write in Present tense using correct grammar and accurate spelling

Pictures to follow ASAP.


Topic - Change (Plants and Seeds)



Change - Plants and Seeds

We are learning to understand that:
Scientists follow a specific process and ask questions that lead to investigations.
Plants need many things to move through the life cycle.

We will know we can do this when we can:
Draw pictures that depict the life cycle of plants.
Label the parts of a plant.
Understand and describe how plants make their own food from water, air (CO2) and sunlight (photosynthesis).
Sort and classify objects into categories of our own making and independently represent these in a Venn diagram.

Noah said, "In topic I have planted a been plant.  I have learnt plants make their food in their leaves.  They make food by mixing sun, water and air in their leaves to make sugar.  It's called photosynthesis.  I learnt about life-cycles and that seeds can drop, get carried by animals, and float like coconuts.  I have been learning to make a venn diagram and sort things into a venn diagram. I put smooth and jagged for the words.  There was only one smooth leaf and there were five in the middle that are a little bit jagged and a little bit smooth. Six leaves are jagged.  I can understand venn diagrams."

Charlie said, "I been learning about plants and life cycles and I'm learning to sort leaves into a Venn Diagram.  I sorted them into jagged leaves and smooth leaves.  I made some mistakes because I found it hard to choose sometimes.  Next time I will sort them better."

James said, "In topic I have been learning about change and plants.  I planted some seeds and they are growing very big each day.  I did some experiments with Mrs GH and a life cycle.  I also learnt to classify leaves into a Venn diagram.  I did spiky and perfect (smooth) leaves.  I sorted them well but I made one mistake, I put sugar maple in the wrong place.  Next time I will try do the right thing which will be easy."


Venn Diagrams on PhotoPeach

Procedural Writing


Here are some photos of our emotional hook for procedural writing!  We had great fun making paper planes!

Procedural Writing

WALT
·       Follow the Writing Process
·       Have a title
·       Write:
1.     Goal stating what to make or do
2.     a list of Materials stating what is needed
3.     a list of sequential Steps telling how to do or make something
·       Write in Present tense
·       Use correct grammar and accurate spelling

What we did:
  • We looked at some examples of procedural writing and how good writing was structured.
  • In order to show the children how important it is to give clear instructions I had them tell me how to make a paper plane.  I followed their instructions exactly and ended up with a crumpled mess. 
  • Then the children made their own planes and we took them outside to see how well they would fly.
  • After that we improved our design and made a second improved plane.
  • Then the children practised giving instructions by telling/showing a partner how to make their paper plane.
  • Finally we were ready to write our draft.  We then checked our writing for punctuation, spelling and made sure we had a title, goal, materials and steps. We published our writing in our writing books. 
  • Our next step is to make carrot racing cars! Watch this space!

Procedural Writing - Emotional Hook on PhotoPeach

Statistical Investigations

Statistical Investigations

WALT: collect data, construct a graph, and discuss the results.

Success Criteria:
I will know I can do this when I can:
·      Know what data is
·      Pose questions for investigation
·      Collect data
·      Use tally marks
·      Make a pictograph
·      Make a bar graph
·      Ask and answer questions about the graph

      James said, "I asked do you like tennis or soccer best? I drew a bar graph. My graph shows how many people like tennis or soccer.  9 people like tennis and 10 people like soccer.  Next time I will ask how many people like different reptiles like snakes, tuataras and lizards.”
      
      Cory said, "I learnt to ask questions like how many people like cake, donuts, apple crumble, ice-cream and fudge.  I then I colored in my bar graph. I found out 10 people like donuts, 2 people like cake, 3 people like apple crumble, 5 people like ice-cream and 1 person likes fudge. Next time I want to pick different foods to ask."




Statistical Investigations on PhotoPeach

Our Trip

Our Trip on PhotoPeach

Fractured Fairytales - Shared Writing


Narratives- Fractured Fairytales

We are learning to write a fictional narrative by adapting a fairy tale.

We will…
·       Follow the Writing Process – planning, draft copy, editing and publishing
·       Have a title
·       Write three paragraphs: an Orientation, an Complication and a Resolution.
·       Write in past tense.
·       Use direct and/or indirect speech. (dialogue).
·       Use alliteration, imagery, metaphor, onomatopoeia, questions and similes to create pictures  with words and build suspense.

Stage 1 – Planning (whole class)
Fractured Fairytale (based on Hansel and Gretel)

Title: The Rescue

Orientation:
Who - Hansel and Gretel
What  - walking
When – wild, stormy night
Where – outside a haunted house

Complication:
Wolves surround them and want to eat them. 

Resolution
-A knight on a white horse saved them?
-Superman saved them?
-The woman in the gingerbread house saved them?



Stage 2 Shared Writing

Title The Rescue
A Shared Story by Room 2

Orientation
The trees were twisted and their branches were like twisted hands coming down to grab us. The wind was as rough as a tornado.  It was like a thunderstorm starting.  The shiny moon was as bright as the sun in the midnight sky as we walked through the forest.

Complication
Suddenly, Owwwl owwwl … wolves surrounded us! They had teeth as sharp as a cobra’s fangs.  Their fur was like a sheep that had been shorn and had been put onto wolves.  Their claws were sharper than alligator’s’ teeth.  We could feel their hot breath and it smelt like rotten cheese. Their ears were as big as elephant’s ears.  The wolves were as big as lions.  Their snouts were as black as gunpowder.  We could see their evil yellow glowing eyes coming towards me… we felt terrified.  We were shaking like a rattlesnakes tail.  Our faces turned pale with fear. Owwl owwwl… We were surrounded. We tried to run.

Resolution
“Run Gretel, run! I screamed.  We ran through the forest.  The trees branches were as sharp as knives as we ran through them. It felt as though they were trying to eat us. Suddenly we saw lights in the distance – it was a house!   We ran for our lives.  We knocked on the gingerbread door.  Creak…an ancient woman came out.  Her skin was as tough and wrinkled as an elephant's skin.  “ Come in you little rascals and have some milo,” she whispered.  The milo was as warm in my throat.  We were safe at last.




Room 2 Photos on PhotoPeach

Winter’s Day
 By Ella

Whoosh, whoosh, woosh, I came running down the stairs.  I could not believe what I could see.  It was amazing. It was awesome.  The snow looked like a piece of paper turned inside out. I went outside.  It was freezing out there.  I could hear lots of sounds like the wind ‘whoosh, whoosh’. I also heard my dog howling like a woof, “awoool awoool!”  She sounded scared so I got dressed and ran to find her.  Then I found her. Mum said I could play with her in the snow.  When Paul got home, mum and I threw square snowballs at him. It was so funny. Then he made his own snowballs and threw them as well.  Then we got into a snowball fight. I felt excited because I love having snowball fights. It was so much fun. 

 The Frosty Day

 By Ella

Brrr, brrr, brrr … one frosty morning I was as cold as a freezer.  It was the coldest day on earth. My mum came into my room and said, “Come on, come on, wake up.”  I said, “No it’s way too cold today.”  But I had to get up. I looked through the window, it was unbelievable.  I didn’t know it was going to snow. All I could see was nothing except for tree trunks. It looked like a piece of paper.  The fences looked like they had been painted white overnight. When everyone was ready we had a snowball fight.  Of course my step dad won. He is really strong. We had a fabulous time! Splash, splash, splash.

Winter’s Day
 By Jack

Have you ever woken up on a snowy day?  Whoosh went the wind.  This happened in 2012.  I said to mum “Can I go outside?”  “But you’ve still got your PJ’s on”, said Mum.  “Oh,” I said.  So I got changed into my clothes and gloves and wooly hat and then went outside.  I slipped on black ice.  The snow was deep.  Bang, bang, bang went the hail on the roof.  The snow was a deep as a mountain inside out. I had a dump truck so I put snow in it and threw it at my sister and dad.    My mum got covered by the cold snow.  Finally the freezing snow stopped.  As soon as the freezing cold snow had stopped hail started to fall from the clouds.  Bang, bang, bang it went on the roof. 

The next day I woke up. I didn’t want to get up.  It was hot as the sun flaming to earth, but I had to get up for school.  “Oh,” I said.  “It’s snowing, yay no school” I said. So I went back to bed.  I woke up at 10 o’clock.  As soon as I went out I slipped on slippery black ice.  Black ice is ice that you cannot see.  Me, my dad and my sister made a snowman.  We put a Crusaders scarf around his neck and put a carrot nose on and stone eyes and a mouth.  We took a picture of it and put it on Facebook.  I felt frozen.  The snow covered the ground like a white blanket.


Nicholas and his Spooky Night

By Nicholas

It was a spooky dark night and the wind was howling like a woof howling at the moon. It was the spooky time of the night and the trees looked like they were reaching out to grab the moon.  The tree trunks were like big shadows trying to get me.  The branches were rustling in the wind.  The trees were reflecting the moon through the window and onto my wall like a spooky hand trying to get me.

A Really Cold Winter

By Nicholas

Have you ever woken up on a day that was so white that it looked like a piece of paper that no-one has drawn on? I stuck out my tongue to feel a piece of hail. It felt like a frosty bee stinging me on the tongue.  I walked down steps and I looked around me, all I could see was white snow like a penguin's home. I reached out to grab a piece of hail and it felt like a snow leopard biting me on the tongue.

Last Winter
By Charlie

Last winter my sister and I built a snowman. It was huge and happy. It sparkled like sapphires being struck by the sun.  Then it starting hailing so we went inside. We went to the upstairs window and looked out. The snowman was dead.  He had been shot to shreds by the hail.  We wanted to rebuild it so we waited for the hail to stop.  Finally, we went outside and made snowballs instead. It was fun. We liked it so we made lots – shovel, shovel, shovel went our hands.  We rolled three giant balls each.  ‘Shhh’ went the balls.  It hailed that night. Clang, clang, clang went the hail on the roof.  I went outside and tasted the snow. It felt like frostbite.  It was cold. My breath was like a dragon's.  I looked up and I could only see cold wet snow.  Whoosh, it was racing like a snow tornado.  Something starting banging.  It was hail, bang, bang, bang! I went inside to have a milo. It was very warm and very nice.  It was a fantastic day!



Here are a selection of the stories from the children.  The other children are still finishing editing their work.  The children have worked hard to include descriptive language in their stories.

Winter
By Amber
Have you ever woken up on a cold winter’s day?  I have.  I ran down the cold stairs.   I looked out the window.  It was snowing.  I ran up the steps then I got into my warm clothes.  I went outside.  It was cold.  Then I ran inside.  I got a hot chocolate. Suddenly I heard a ‘sh sh sh’.  It was the snow coming down!  I made a sparkly snowman with my brother Reuben.  The snowman had a shiny black hat and a stripy wool scarf.  He had a smiley face made from a banana and blue eyes made from stones.  The wind blew the scarf around like a tornado.  The snow on the ground looked like a sparkly white blanket.  My dog came out and knocked the snowman over.  I felt sad so I built an igloo and the dog went inside it.  Then it started hailing and hailstones hit my head, OUCH!  I ran inside as fast as a cheetah.  It was awesome day.




Ethan’s Winter
By Ethan
One icy and frosty morning I woke up.  Down the hallway I could hear snow like hail.  First, I opened the door and I heard ‘CRUNCH’.  Then I saw my dog on snow as white as  a piece of paper.  I snuggled up to mum and dad… SNORE went dad… Then I heard ‘BEEP’.  My mum got a text message. It said no school YAY!  After that I got my gear on.  It felt real.  It was epic.  Then I sat by the warm fire.  Finally I ran a bath - SSSSS.  It was epic.  I wish you could have seen me and my dog.

The Second Best Day Of My Life
By Logan
Have you ever woken up on a snowy day and all you could see is the sun reflecting on the ice like glass?  I have! The land looked like a giant piece of paper with only the tree trunks showing.  The next day… whoosh!  I woke up and I looked out the window - it was snowing! I fell down the stairs.  I ran outside.  I made a massive snowman. It was the best day ever.

Last Year’s Winter
By James
Last winter it snowed like paper covering the land and little snowballs like scrunched up paper fell from the sky.  I went outside, it just kept on snowing.  We built an igloo for Elka.  It was freezing like I was in a giant freezer.  The ice was like hard diamonds covering the road. I could see trees covered in thick white snow and frost. Mum and Dad tried to make a snowman but it didn’t work that well.  The next day I woke up, put some warm clothes on and went outside.  When I was outside my brother and I had a snowball fight but I lost.  The igloo was largely melted and Elka was Scardie were investigating the invisible snow.  The next day the ice wasn’t translucent anymore.  It was an amazing day.



Winter’s Day
By Amelia
Have you ever woken up on a snowy morning?  I have.  I was in bed and then suddenly I woke up and I rushed to my window and hurried to open the curtains and then I saw the world it looked like a piece of paper and only the tree branches were showing.  I was amazed!  I rushed down the stairs and opened the plain white door.  I rushed into the dripping wet snow I went down the street – crunch, crunch, crunch! The playground looked like a big playhouse (yay) and then I saw dark clouds heading this way.  “Oh no!’ I said. I rushed back to the house and then my mum handed me a hot cup of milo.  It tasted like liquid heaven.  I said "thank you mummy very much!" It was an excellent day.

My Snowy Holiday
 By Liam

I woke up and opened the white curtains but they looked yellow in the morning sun. I saw white snow everywhere. The trees looked like white ghosts and only the tree trunks were showing.   Puffy white clouds dropped snow down onto our front yard and back yard.  I ran outside.  My brother Josh and my next-door neighbour Alex and I had a snowball fight.  We made 90 snowballs each.  It was hard to make hard balls of snow.  We made snow huts to protect us in the fight.  We threw our snowballs out of the windows… BOOM!  They smashed on the other huts… SMASH!  They crashed on the huts… CRASH! Then we went inside and had hot chocolate while we played x-box.  It was a great day.

Pou's Winter Story


The Snowy Dragon
By Pou

My toes were numb and icy.  Whoosh went the wind.  Dragon smoke came out of my dragon mouth. My ears felt numb too. My nose was frozen.  I could see snow coming out of the sky.  The clouds moved slowly like snowflakes.  Black tree branches reached out into the sky.  I opened the back door of my house and went inside.  After that I had a warm milo.  It tasted nice.  It was a great holiday.

Finished Winter Poems





Winter 
By Leah

White
Ice cubes
Nice, soft snow
Terrific snow fall
Eventually it stops
Rumbling snow falling off roofs.


Winter
By Brayden

White everywhere
Ice as cold as Antarctica
Translucent as ice
Earthquake noises
Rumbling rain


Winter
By Logan

Windy air
Icicles
Nice, translucent
Transparent as ice
Experience the snow
Raining, Snowing



Winter
By Jack

Warm milo
Ice is cold
North Pole is cold
Translucent ice
Exciting snow
Raining, cold snow


Winter
By Ethan

Winter is freezing
Ice as cold as snow
North Pole is as cold as Antarctica
Translucent like glass
Even colder than the North Pole
Raining, cold snow


Winter
By Jak

Snow has little flakes
Ice as cold as Antarctica
I’m nice and warm inside
Terrible wind
Earthquake noises
Raining


Winter
By Amelia

Wind as cold as snow
Ice as cold as Antarctica
Ice-cold rain
Translucent like snow
Rain as cold as icicles


Winter
By Charlotte

Wet like a rainy day
Ice like the roads
Nice milo as warm as a heater
Tea as warm as a house with the fire on
Eggs as cold as its shell
Rain as colds as the snow


Winter
By Daniel

Wet
Ice
Night
Translucent
Exciting
Rain



Winter
By James

Windy air like frostbite
Ice as deep as snow
Nice snow like paper covering the land
Tilting trees like icicles
Eels frozen in ponds
Really warm hot chocolate


Winter
By Nicholas

Winter is cold
Ice from the clouds
Nice and warm inside
Terrible lightning and thunder
Even lots of snow and ice
Rain beating down


Winter
By Riley

Wind as cold as snow
Ice as cold as ice-blocks
Nice warm milo
Trees covered in snow
Exciting snow
Rain as cold as icicles